Hello! I'm Wendy Paola, I'm sixteen years old, I live in Soledad, in the manantial, my favorite colors is pink, I'm student in the bilingual administrative assistant program in the colombo, my favorite singer is Fonseca, I'm love listen music every day, I have two sisters and one brother. I
don't have boyfriend, I
My sister is Mayra, She's nine years old, She fulfills the five of march, She to play every day in the park with its friendly, Her favorite colors is blue, Her loves dance regueton, She's very beautiful, fan and intelligent, She get up in the morning to the 5:30 and Her favorite movie is bob esponja.
My mother, Her name is alejandra mendoza, She's nurse, She work in the barranquilla hospital, She's forty years old, She's very very beautiful, good, fan and friendly, she loves eat hamburger, her favorite pastime is to see TV and listen music...!!!! ok goodbye
Good post.
ResponderEliminarWhy don't you split this composition in different paragraghs:
Hello! I'm Wendy Paola, I'm sixteen years old. I live in Soledad. My favorite colors is pink. I'm a student in the Bilingual Administrative Assistant Program in the Colombo. My favorite singer is Fonseca, I love listening to music every day.
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Hello Wendy. Great composition but, capital letter in Hello.
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Heloo Wendy great blog...even that I would like to remind you that when you are talking about plural the better way is to use ARE so that is my advise for you bye bye ;)
ResponderEliminarHi friend...I agree whith your classmates, also do u have some mistakes in words for example: fan.. and remenber the thrid person in get up...
ResponderEliminarbye bye